Maddy's Second Response

Your information is great so far. I like how you are focusing on unusual aspects of social networking as opposed to the usual "social networking is bad - don't do it" approach. I've learned more from your blog than I have from any of those articles. One thing you might consider looking into is how advertisers use the information given on social networking sights to further their ability to market to you. The privacy issue is really at the forefront of concerns with social networking right now, beyond the whole intra personal issues.

Great blog! I would write more but class is over.

Jamien's 2nd Response to Marni

Marni,
I can tell that your are highly interested in your topic resulting in you finding a ton of information. You need to work on your color coding of your posts so everything matches up. You also should title your notes as the title of your article. Your research this far is very strong. Online social networking is an important aspect of today's teenage world. The most important part of online social networking is that everyone is safe. I like the background of your blog. You should be able to find a surplus amount of information. Just fix a few minor things on your blog! Try ProQuest, it was helpful to me. Keep up the great work!

Jamien

Olivia H's Second Response

First off Marni, you need to fix your color coding and title your notes. Other than these two issues I say you've been doing a very good job researching and understanding your topic. I notice that you are focusing mostly on pros rather than cons, but would the cons of online social networking serve as good back ground information? Like, why are parents so concerned about their children? From what you've researched, their is no indication of a reason behind their concern. I suggest doing some research into the cons of online social networking to strengthen your I-Search

Malcolm's Second Response

I thought that the information you posted from your first three articles was very engaging. I feel that by reading your blog, I have learned more things than I knew before I'd started reading it. I thought that the information was good, but I also think that your personal responses could be a little more detailed.