1/14/09
Emily's Third Response
Marni, great topic! Online social networking is a really big issue right now, privacy is important to everyone. The color of your notes is a little too light, it's hard to read. Also, you could try to add more to your notes and responses, just to help people understand you topic a little bit more. Your doing a great job!
Christine's Response to 4,5,6
Hey Marni!
You have a good topic, but maybe you could include a little bit more to help strengthen it in the end. Also, your notes for the articles are a little too light colored for the light blue backround, but other than that keep it up. I've heard your having trouble finding some information, but maybe you could go further into the police using social networking by talking to an actual police that uses it in investigations. We had some detectives come into our school at Whitefield once and what they've been doing with that stuff is very interesting. That might be a good thing to do if that is where your project takes you! Keep it up!
You have a good topic, but maybe you could include a little bit more to help strengthen it in the end. Also, your notes for the articles are a little too light colored for the light blue backround, but other than that keep it up. I've heard your having trouble finding some information, but maybe you could go further into the police using social networking by talking to an actual police that uses it in investigations. We had some detectives come into our school at Whitefield once and what they've been doing with that stuff is very interesting. That might be a good thing to do if that is where your project takes you! Keep it up!
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